Emma Caldridge gazed out the open SUV window at the beauty of the savannah, unaware that in the tall grasses a man lurked.
But once I’ve introduced those around Emma, I’ll use their last names and they refer to her as “Caldridge.” So for the bulk of the book everyone is called by their last names. Only Emma remains and in my next book in that series I’m using Caldridge as well. It’s tough, because this particular character feels like an old friend, but I’ll finish the draft and see how it works.
Another thing I’m switching up is my use of traditional “male” or “female” names. It probably surprises no one that as a woman with a gender neutral name, I lean toward those for my female characters as well. Well, with one exception. My all time favorite name is Elizabeth, after my Great, Grand Aunt Elizabeth who was the original feminist in our long line of strong women. Each time I write a new female character I find myself defaulting to Elizabeth.
So, if you’re writing a character, think long and hard about the last name and the impression that you want to convey with that name. A Taylor or Brittany will often have a different, more modern connotation than Ruth or Adele or Claudia, but if you’re using last names throughout the book it’s the last name that you’ll be living with for the next year or so.
And the last name that I picked for my musician? It’s Marcus. We’ll see how that works for the revision.
And I’d love to hear your thoughts on names. Any that fit perfectly? Any fails? Let me know in the comments below.