by | Oct 30, 2020 | Extraordinary Guest Bloggers | 5 comments

James Swallow is a New York Times, Sunday Times and Amazon bestselling author, a BAFTA nominee, a former journalist and the award-winning writer of over fifty books, along with numerous scripts for videogames, radio and television. His latest novel ROGUE is the sixth book in a series of fast-paced action thrillers featuring protagonist Marc Dane, out now from Bonnier Zaffre in the UK and Europe; readers in North America can catch up with Swallow’s fiction in EXILE (out now in paperback) and GHOST (coming in November in hardcover) from Forge Books.

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NOMADS, GHOSTS & ROGUES – The Serious Business of Thriller Titles

by James Swallow

We’ve been told that judging a book by its cover is not proper, but let’s be honest, we all do it. A bit of dynamic cover artwork is just the thing to hook the attention of a passing reader in a bookstore – but that’s not enough if you don’t have a thrilling title to seal the deal. 

I have to admit, I can’t start writing unless I have a title in mind. Even if that changes during the writing, I’ve got to have something – I can’t just call it “Book X” and get to typing. A good title sets the tone for everything that comes after it.

For me, the perfect title is a combination of a number of factors. It can’t be too long. It has to have a sense of impact. It has to connect strongly to something in the story. And lastly – this is the hard part – I want it to have a deeper meaning that only becomes clear to the reader after they’ve finished the work. 

When I wrote the first book in my Marc Dane series, my goal was to create a fast-paced, tech-savvy espionage thriller for the digital age, set in a post-Snowden, post-WikiLeaks world where private military contractors, agile terror cells and corporations wield as much power as national intelligence agencies. 

Marc Dane is the protagonist, an MI6 field operative accused of betraying his country who uncovers a horrific conspiracy. Relying only on his skills and his wits to stay one step ahead of those hunting him, Marc crosses paths with ex-Special Forces sniper Lucy Keyes and her boss, the enigmatic African billionaire Ekko Solomon, the man behind the shadowy Rubicon Group; together they must race the clock to stop a devastating terrorist attack.

I settled on Nomad as the title for a number of reasons – partly because it was the code-name for the MI6 covert ops team my hero belonged to, but also because this was a story about a man on his own fighting to clear his name, someone forced into a nomadic experience for much of the novel. Little did I know, I was making a rod for my own back… My publishers wanted 5-letter titles for every book in the series – they wanted to create a sense of identity for Marc Dane’s adventures that readers could recognize instantly. Nomad was followed by ExileGhost, then Shadow (and yes, I got complaints from some readers because I added an extra letter!) and most recently Rogue.

One of the marketing team told me that the series titles all reflect a ‘state of being’, which I thought was a pretty cool take; personally, I think they could also be the names of high-end men’s fragrances too, but what do I know? I’d love to tell you what the 6th book in the series will be called, but we’re still arguing that one out!

So what is the secret of the eye-catching title? 

I think it is the ones that set up a question so that the reader is compelled to find the answer. Why is the Red October being hunted? Where has the Girl Gone? What happened to Bourne’s Identity? Speaking personally, those are the ones that draw me in like a magnet, which is what every author wants from a reader.

Your mileage may vary of course, and maybe you’re wondering if I’m overthinking this – but remember that the title of your book is literally the first thing a potential reader will read. What you communicate to them in those words can mean the difference between them taking your story home or leaving it on the shelf.

Thank you, James Swallow! Readers, which James Swallow book is your favorite? Us Rogues have a soft-spot for Rogue
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  1. Rogue Women Writers

    What an interesting take on choosing a title for a thriller. Now I can't wait to read ROGUE along with other books by this terrific author, James Swallow. Thanks for being our guest here today!!…Karna Small Bodman

  2. Lisa Black

    Of course we love your title! But you’ve given me incentive to be more disciplined in choosing my titles. I tend to be self indulgent!

  3. Carla Neggers

    Great titles! LOL in the fragrance take. Looking forward to reading your books and thanks for being here!

  4. Jenny Milchman

    I'm the same–needing a title in mind. Yours are great (I love the one word punch), and congrats on your new release!

  5. Chris Goff

    It's hard to find a good title–and critical. I like to have a title in mind, too. Unfortunately, I'm often asked to change them. Thanks for the insights into finding just the right one. Great blog!